Everything is Liquid

August 13, 2007 / by luckystar

EVERYTHING IS LIQUID


As my hand warmly melts into the mirror,
passing through glass, in search of touch,
I cry out "We are the same!"

Tears, gifted to me by a flowering love
can not contain the joy, or sorrow,
this understanding brings

No, I would not have danced with you,
even under clouded light of moon,
absent of reflection

Our shadows told the story of sameness,
but with the ears of an antagonist,
I had altered the plot

While still warm from the spectrum experience
I shed my clothes at the waters edge
as everything now, is liquid

11 comments on Everything is Liquid

  • Catidogi said 1 years ago
    [SMILE] Wonderfully concise...
  • luckystar said 1 years ago
    Thank you very much catidogi. I send you peace.[SMILE]
  • grahamsherwood said 1 years ago
    Nicely worked out piece Lore. Terrific first and final verses, very difficult to get correct, both strong in their own right. Graham.
  • luckystar said 1 years ago
    Thank you Graham. [SMILE] I feel good about this piece. But then I often feel good about a poem I write, only to read it over after a few months have passed, and not be as pleased.
    Have a great week my friend.
  • greeneyedgemini said 1 years ago
    Lovely![HEART][HEART]
  • luckystar said 1 years ago
    Thank you greeneyes.[SMILE]
  • beadingbuddy said 1 years ago
    What a wonderful work of words. I look forward to visiting again soon.
  • luckystar said 1 years ago
    Thank you so very much.[SMILE]
  • lynnette said 1 years ago
    wow[SMILE][HEART]
  • luckystar said 1 years ago
    Thank you Lynette, I hope all is well in your world.[SMILE]
  • lynnette said 1 years ago
    everythings cool[HEART]

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